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English: Here a board of comics whom I made with the colored pencils. These characters are invented by me.
It is a guy who wants to pick up a pretty woman. But for her girlfriend, it does not support and it sends it to the sky. It is a kind of jealousy.
Caution! French text. Year 2007.
French: Voici une planche de bande dessinée que j'ai fait aux crayons de couleurs. Ces personnages sont inventés par moi.
C'est un gars qui veut draguer une jolie femme. Mais pour sa copine, elle ne supporte pas et elle l'envoie au ciel. C'est une sorte de jalousie. Année 2007.
It is a guy who wants to pick up a pretty woman. But for her girlfriend, it does not support and it sends it to the sky. It is a kind of jealousy.
Caution! French text. Year 2007.French: Voici une planche de bande dessinée que j'ai fait aux crayons de couleurs. Ces personnages sont inventés par moi.
C'est un gars qui veut draguer une jolie femme. Mais pour sa copine, elle ne supporte pas et elle l'envoie au ciel. C'est une sorte de jalousie.
Année 2007.Image size
6700x1918px 2.94 MB
Make
Canon
Model
MP520 series
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Originality Technique ImpactI think this is a great comic in general. The drawings are very vivid, and the coloring is great. I can see you added some shading, but maybe you should have added some more shading, make the jacket of the boy darker when the sun is at the back to him. Also, maybe you could have colored a bit better, by making the colors a bit brighter. Right now the colors are a bit too light. And in the last panel, the girl's arm should be outstretched a bit more. However, the comic is funny, and a very simple idea makes it a great comic to read.